Review my CDLC before I publish?

[lduperval]

Hi,

 

Is someone willing to review my CDLC and let me know your thoughts? In particular, I find it quite hard to play and I'm wondering if it's because of my charting or because, well, it's just hard. When I listen to the bass it doesn't seem hard but when it comes time to play...

 

It's here:

 

https://drive.google.com/open?id=14OLki80f0637EbqpuQoT4WcxLShX8ZE-

 

Thanks!

 

L

[Rockfirstlast]

The link doesn't work.

[lduperval]

Hmmm.. Thanks for letting me know. Does this one work?

 

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14OLki80f0637EbqpuQoT4WcxLShX8ZE-/view?usp=sharing

 

L

[lduperval]

And I forgot to mention that it's bass oly.

 

L

[Rockfirstlast]

Link works; just played it.

 

The sync is good.

 

Fret hand positions are not good in parts of the song.  Fixing them will make the chart easier to read.

 

Look at the song in EOF.  Press SHIFT+F11 until you can see the fret hand positions on top.  Play each measure on your bass and see if your hand position matches with what's on the screen.  Do this from the first measure to the last.  It's a 10 minute song, so this will take a while.

 

http://customsforge.com/index.php/topic/30557-guidelines-for-official-looking-customs/

[lduperval]

Thanks for the recommendation and the review. I'll (re?)read that link and work on the fingering.

 

Thanks!

 

L